Here's what I am thinking... I like "IF YOU" and there needs to be a bit more space between "OBEY" and "ALL." The space between "the" and "RULES" is okay, but it needs to be a bit lower than the word row above it. I just realized I can't spell "YOU" so that's gonna have to change (gee, that's funny-looking).I like the spacing of the letters in "MISS" but the lady is too high, she has to move down lower, because I don't like the wide empty space between "the RULES" and "YOU MISS," and obviously I can't chop her head off.
I started sewing the words together because I needed to see how much space these words would occupy, and so I would get a better sense what to with the "all the" and then the "Fun" which come afterward.
Update:
OK, I fixed "YOU" and I lowered the lady just a bit, and I think it is looking good.
"the" and "Rules" need a bit more space between them, as do "YOU" and "MISS", but I really think the first two words may need to be centered, like so...
I'm starting to get excited!
Let the word MISS be the first to be a little wonky ... perhaps a slight slant from upper left to lower right to accommodate the difference in letter heights?
ReplyDeleteI LOVE that you stitched YOU together the "wrong" way ... TOO funny! (first broken rule right there).
Have fun! (Your F is fantastic, btw)
Have you ever printed on fabric? It occurred to me that you could scan the lady and print her out slightly smaller.
ReplyDeleteHi - Just visiting. Love those letters and most of the modifications! However... a thought ...centering " IF YOU" looks like following the rules :) Personally, I liked it the other way better but anyway is very fun!!
ReplyDeletelove the miss in the miss. heee hee hee
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